Pitch the 2nd feedback

People thought that the pitch showed very clearly what we are trying to achieve and many liked the idea. One individual highlighted that the locations need to be unrecognisable in order for the video to work other wise it has the risk of looking very amateur. others liked how we bought together the band playing live and our video by the iconic ribbons.
They think lighting effects should have a key role in our piece, something we did not mention in our pitch.